Tuesday, April 2, 2019
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Kia ora Holly, I am Tayla from Marshland School, Your animation was very creative and funny and it made me laugh! This reminded me of when I went snorkeling in Fiji, Maybe next time you could make the slides a bit longer as when I scrolled through it I couldn´t really see what they were saying. But it´s still a great animation keep up the good work!
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Hi holly it was funny.
ReplyDeleteKia ora, Holly.
ReplyDeleteYour animation was cool and creative.
Did you think about telling more of the story? When I read it I got a bit confused about why they suddenly got married.
Next time you could use less slides on you turtles movement and end the story. Thanks, Francheska :)
That is a good animation i like when the fish says the turtle is pretty and they get married.
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