Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, April 23, 2020
Fun fort
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Hi holly I really like your hut you made.Are you going to put anything inside?
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ReplyDeleteI really liked the creative Idea to build a fort. The only thing I would suggest is giving us access to the room tour video. Overall I think you did a great Job.
By LP
Hi Holly it Sophie, I relly liked your fort, and I liked how you included alot of different coloured blnkets and not just one colour. Maybe next time you could put something inside the fort like you could make a maze in there? And next time maybe you could allow access to the video. Overall I really liked your fort and think you did a great job.
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